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-title: "Dopamine dispensers"
+title: "The case for dopamine dispensers"
 subtitles: "Likes and clicks and green badges and comments and analytics and ____ can be helpful, actually"
 author: ["Amolith"]
 published: 2023-02-26T23:09:00-05:00
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-Dopamine dispensers --- likes on social media platforms, stars on GitHub,
-website clicks, etc. --- are inherently damaging and lead only to addiction.
+Dopamine dispensers --- likes on social media platforms, stars on GitHub, clicks
+on your website, etc. --- are inherently damaging and lead only to addiction ...
+is what I used to say. Lately, I've begun thinking otherwise. They absolutely
+are dangerous and can promote harmful behaviour, _but in moderation_, I believe
+that they can be quite helpful.
 
-Dopamine dispensers absolutely are dangerous and can promote harmful behaviour,
-but I've begun to think that, _in moderation_, they can be quite helpful and
-encouraging.
+[pra]: /privacy-respecting-analytics/
+
+There are a few examples I often see vilified and I'll address each one:
+
+- Social media "likes" (fediverse favourites, Reddit upvotes, etc.)
+- GitHub stars
+- Website views
+
+# Software development
 
 - https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=31963467
 - https://ntietz.com/blog/moving-off-github/
 - https://lists.sr.ht/~sircmpwn/sr.ht-discuss/%3CF98B7AC8-6EAF-4884-9C3B-DA3711BE7085%40traduction-libre.org%3E#%3CCBMEJKAUK9CL.34S27FE2XA4G0@taiga%3E
 - https://www.coss.community/cossc/ocs-2020-breakout-drew-devault-4407
 - https://drewdevault.com/2019/05/24/What-is-a-fork.html
+
+# Website traffic
+
+# Social media
+
+This is perhaps the more dangerous